Some feedback Amar gave me was to think about my project in a more deconstructed sense. I will do this by going over my story and finding the big message(s) it sends and working off of those. Some other feedback he gave me was to think more about "the more you use it the more the color changes", like the led becomes brighter and warmer the more you use it. Use more bleak/sad/ugly colors at first and then turn them into something beautiful. He also said to be very radical with the project and to try to see how the use of the pencil means and how it relates to the abstraction.